Jack是一名九年级的学生.最近迷上手机游戏.经常玩到深夜.睡眠不足.不能认真听讲.导致成绩下降．妈妈很生气.不再让他使用手机．假如你是他的朋友Tina.请你写一封信给他.建议他要合理使用手机.如查阅资料.记单词等．同时.考试在即.要理解父母.老师的心情.要主动去沟通.得到他们的原谅和帮助．要求:包含所给要点.语言流畅.意思连� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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Jack是一名九年级的学生，最近迷上手机游戏，经常玩到深夜，睡眠不足，不能认真听讲，导致成绩下降．妈妈很生气，不再让他使用手机．假如你是他的朋友Tina，请你写一封信给他，建议他要合理使用手机，如查阅资料，记单词等．同时，考试在即，要理解父母、老师的心情，要主动去沟通，得到他们的原谅和帮助．
要求：
包含所给要点，语言流畅，意思连贯，适当拓展；词数80词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：become poor in study； get angry with； communicate with； forgive．
Dear Jack，
I am sorry to hear that you quarreled with your parents about playing mobile phone games．
．
Yours，
Tina．

分析高分句型：
句型一：
You spent so much time playing games that you forgot when to sleep．你花那么多时间玩游戏，你忘记了什么时候睡觉．
so…that 引导的结果状语从句中，so…that 意为"如此…以致"．
spend sometime doing sth花费时间做某事
句型二：
You felt too sleepy and tired to listen to theteachers in class the next day．你觉得太困了，累了，以至于第二天不能听老师讲课．
too…to…太…而不能…

解答 Dear Jack，
I am sorry to hear that you quarrelled with your parents about playing mobile phone games．
You spent so much time playing games that you forgot when to sleep．【高分句型一】You felt too sleepy and tired to listen to the teachers in class the next day．【高分句型二】Because of these，you became poor in your study．（害处）Your mother got angry with you．You felt bad about this．Firstly，I think you should stop playing games．You can use mobile phone to search for information，and look up newwords．It is a useful tool in your study．Secondly，you need to communicate with yourparents and teachers．Let them know your problems．They will help you．At the same time，they will forgive you for your mistakes．（建议）
I hope my suggestions are of great value toyou．
Yours，
Tina

点评试题分析：写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等．