题目内容
【题目】写作:
根据下面的提示,以 A Trip to Nanjing写一篇六十词左右的短文。
一.南京是江苏省的一座非常美丽的城市。它的历史悠久。
二.那儿有许多风景名胜,每年吸引上百万的游人。
三.我早就在电视上目睹了南京的秀丽景色,但我却从来没有去过那儿。
四.下周我要去南京开会,昨晚我兴奋得无法入睡。
五.我相信我的南京之行肯定会很愉快。
【答案】
A Trip to Nanjing
Nanjing is a very beautiful city with a long history in Jiangsu province. There are a lot of places of interest attracting millions of visitors every year.
I have seen the beautiful scenery of Nanjing on TV, but I have never been there before. I'm going to Nanjing for a meeting next week. I was so excited that I couldn't sleep last night.
I am sure that my trip to Nanjing will be very happy.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写,要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点:这篇短文语句精炼,段落清晰,表达了题目中的每个要点。文中用到了并列句(I have seen the beautiful scenery of Nanjing on TV, but I have never been there before.)、主从复合句(I was so excited that I couldn't sleep last night.)和There be句型(There are a lot of places of interest attracting millions of visitors every year.),这些都为文章增添了色彩。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。