Question

7．Emily将她的烦恼写在了博客上并征求大家的建议．请了解她的烦恼并写出你（Chen Lin-from Dongying）的建议，要求字数在100词左右，建议的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数．
建议应包括：（1）孩子应尊重父母（2）父母经验丰富（3）父母的要求是对你的成长有好处的（4）…（5）多同父母交流沟通．
Possible new words：respect v & n．尊重；  responsible adj．有责任感的；
demand v．& n．要求
Here are Emily's problems on the Blog：
My problem is my parents．They never stop going on about（唠叨） how I should keep my room clean，keep my hair tidy and wear smart clothes．They even make me do the washing-up after dinner every night!None of my friends have got such terrible parents．What should I do？
Emily，USA
Hi，Emily．I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents．You should understand and respect them，and do what they ask you to do．They have richer experience and better advice for young people．As your parents，they surely hope you become an excellent person．Their demands are helpful for your growing up．
Every member should be responsible and do something for the family．So you should do what you can do，such as keep your room clean and do the washing-up．Remember：Learning by doing．
You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes．Teenagers should look like teenagers．
Anyway，if you have any problems，just talk with your parents．
Chen Lin，Dongying．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是对朋友在生活中遇见的烦恼提出建议．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第二人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
（1）孩子应尊重父母（2）父母经验丰富（3）父母的要求是对你的成长有好处的（4）其他（5）多同父母交流沟通．

常用到的重点短语：
it's adj for sb to do sth对某人而言做某事是怎么样的
are helpful for对…有用
such as 例如
keep sb/sth+adj保持某人某物怎么样
Learning by doing从做中学
anyway无论如何
高分句型：
1． I think①②it's lucky for you to have such good parents．
①省略了that的宾语从句，作为think的宾语．
②it's adj for sb to do sth对某人而言做某事是怎么样的，it作为形式主语，to do sth做真正主语．
2．①Anyway，②if you have any problems，just talk with your parents．
①anyway无论如何，副词．
②if 引导的条件状语从句，主句是祈使句，从句用一般现在时代替一般将来时．

解答 Hi，Emily．I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents（高分句型）．You should understand and respect them，and do what they ask you to do．（尊重父母）They have richer experience and better advice for young people．（父母经验丰富）As your parents，they surely hope you become an excellent person．Their demands are helpful for your growing up．（父母的要求是对你的成长有好处的）Every member should be responsible and do something for the family．So you should do what you can do，such as keep your room clean and do the washing-up．Remember：Learning by doing．You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes．Teenagers should look like teenagers．（其他）
 Anyway，if you have any problems，just talk with your parents．（高分句型）（多同父母交流沟通）
Chen Lin，Dongying

点评 此为材料作文，要仔细审题，抓住重点，将所给信息条理清楚的表达出来，可使用一些表示顺序的词，使论述更明确，更有层次感．还要注意多使用一些委婉的提建议的句型，尽量使用不同的句型以避免文章枯燥单调．要求语句通顺，语法，词汇，时态正确，书写规范