假如你是温泉中学的陈林.曾在你班任教过的美国老师Mr．Brown 离开你校一年了．他想了解学校.班级及你目前的情况．请你根据所给信息给他写一封电子邮件.并希望他有时间再来你校参观访问．内容要点:去年今年学校搬进新教学楼(teaching building)班级50人52人,王东和父母去武汉了篮球赛输了上月篮球赛赢了,全班同学还是每天锻炼1小时� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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4．假如你是温泉中学的陈林，曾在你班任教过的美国老师Mr．Brown 离开你校一年了．他想了解学校、班级及你目前的情况．请你根据所给信息给他写一封电子邮件，并希望他有时间再来你校参观访问．（以上背景内容无需表述）
内容要点：

	去年	今年
学校		搬进新教学楼（teaching building）
班级	50人	52人；王东和父母去武汉了
班级	篮球赛输了	上月篮球赛赢了；全班同学还是每天锻炼1小时
个人	英语不太好	英语取得很大进步；帮助同桌（deskmate）张楠学习数学

要求：
1．电子邮件中应该包括所提供的信息，但可以适当发挥；
2．不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Mr．Brown，
I haven't seen you for a year．I miss you very much．Here I'd like to tell you something about us．
How are you getting on with your work？I hope you can visit our school if you have time．
Yours，
Chen Lin．

分析这是一篇电子邮件，要符合应用文的格式．有称呼、正文和署名．陈林告诉美国老师Mr．Brown，在离校一年后学校、班级及你目前的情况．内容要有前后一年情况的对比，体现出表格里的所有内容；故时态用一般现在时态和一般过去时态．描述学校情况用第三人称；描述自己的情况要用第一人称；并在最后提出希望，希望Mr．Brown 有时间再回来参观访问．

解答 Possible version：
Dear Mr．Brown，
    I haven't seen you for a year．I miss you very much．Here I'd like to tell you something about us．
    We have moved into the new teaching building． It's big and bright．Our teachers and classmates are all very happy．There were 50 students in our class last year．This year，we have 52． Wang Dong has left for Wuhan with his parents．Do you still remember that we lost the basketball match last year？But we won the match last month．All of us exercise for an hour every day．
    And you know I wasn't good at English before，now I am glad to tell you that I have made great progress by practicing hard． Thanks for your help and I find it interesting to learn English．And at the same time，I am helping my desk mate Zhang Nan with his math． We are getting along well with each other．
    How are you getting on your work？I hope you can visit our school if you have time．

Chen Lin

点评书面表达的主要依据是内容，因此在认真审题，弄清题意的基础上，要逐个地完整无缺地把内容要点列出来，对于以图画或图表为内容的提示，更要仔细观察．写作时必要的细节要紧扣主题，发挥要适度，不要太随意．此篇书面表达就要根据图表进行构思．