题目内容
【题目】书面表达
运动有利于身心健康,青少年应加强体育锻炼。某英文网站举办以“I Like Taking Exercise”为题的征文活动。请根据下表内容,写一篇英语短文。内容包括:你喜欢什么运动,运动的好处以及你对体育锻炼的倡议。
提示:1.短文应包括表中的全部全息,条理清楚,行文连贯。
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I Like Taking Exercise | |
Exercise | 1. Run, swim…… 2. Play ping-pong and basketball |
Benefits | 1. Keep healthy 2. Help brains have a rest 3. It’s good for study …… |
My ideas | |
I Like Taking Exercise
I like taking exercise.
【答案】I Like Taking Exercise
I like taking exercise. There are many kinds of sports that I like, such as running, swimming, playing ping-pong and basketball and so on. I like basketball best, because I think it is very exciting and can build up team-work spirit as well as my body. I often play basketball with my friends after school or on weekends. I think doing sports can keep healthy and helps brain have a rest. It is good for study. I think students today are having more and more stress, so they had better play more sports to relax themselves so that they can improve their grade.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们以I Like Taking Exercise为题,介绍自己最喜欢的运动、运动的好处以及自己对体育锻炼的倡议。题目中利用表格的形式,列出了文章的大概结构,并且提供了一些写作中会用到的关键词,我们可以根据这些提示,补充更多的细节信息,确定文章主体,串联成文。审题可知,这篇短文应包括以下几个内容:首先介绍自己喜欢的运动及原因;然后叙述以下运动的好处;最后呼吁同学们都来锻炼身体。写作时应注意合理安排这几个内容,分清主次,并注意前后的连贯。文章应使用一般现在时、第一人称来叙述,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构考虑,使用完整的句子结构,如主谓宾或主系表结构,简单句结构易于掌握,且不易出错。而要想提高作文档次,则应注意句式的变化,穿插使用并列句或复合句结构,以及其他复杂结构,如非谓语动词、固定短语等。同时注意语句直接的连接,使用一些衔接成分,使文意连贯。