Question

9．假如你叫Jane，这个暑假你们全家准备出去旅游，就下列内容给旅行社的经理写一封信．
注意：1、字数80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
       2、不得在文中透露自己的真实姓名和学校名称，否则不予评分．

Dear manager，
My whole family want to
                                                     
Yours，
Jane．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①we want to book a hotel which is not expensive．我们想预定一个不是很贵的旅馆．want to do sth想做某事，a hotel which is not expensive，这里 which is not expensive作定语修饰hotel，构成一个定语从句，这里表示物用which来引导．
②We are looking forward to this journey．我们期待着这次旅行．look forward to期待，后面跟动词ing形式．

解答 Dear manager，
My whole family want to have a journey to Dalian during the summer holiday．It will begin on July 10th，and the journey will last for ten days．We will go there by plane．Could you help me book seven air tickets？Then，we want to book a hotel which is not expensive（高分句型）．We need three rooms for seven people，and what's the most important，the hotel should not be far from the ocean．（介绍旅游的时间、乘坐的交通工具以及住宿要求）
We will take a walk along the beach in the morning，and we will go swimming and playing volleyball on the beach after lunch．Besides，my father and I will go surfing and diving into the water in the afternoon．It will be great fun．In the evening，we will eat many different kinds of seafood．It will be an exciting vacation and we will have a good time．（介绍旅游的一些计划）
We are looking forward to this journey（高分句型）．Thank you for your helping us．（期待及感谢）
                                                       Yours，
                                                       Jane

点评 这是一篇图表作文，所给材料比较详细，且都用英语给出，故只需要将这些材料按照一定的逻辑顺序组织成文即可．在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性．