Question

11．亲爱的同学，在过去的三年中，你的老师与你朝夕相处，他们关心你、帮助你、教育你．现在初中生活即将结束，假如你是李华，请给你的高老师写一封信，表达你的感激之情．
要求：
1、文章内容符合题意，可参考上图所给提示词；
2、文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
3、词数90左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）．
Dear Miss Gao，
How time flies!                   be grateful to           ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I didn't prepare for the exam because I played computer games too much those days．我没有准备考试，因为那些天我玩电脑游戏太多了．这是一个because引导的原因状语从句，因为…．
高分句型二
I will never forget that day when you talked with me face to face．我永远不会忘记和你面对面交谈的那一天．这是一个when引导的定语从句，先行词是day．

解答 Dear Miss Zhang，
How time flies!My life in junior school will come to an end soon．Life was happy in the past three years，but there is one bad thing in my mind，I failed an important exam last year【开头点明主题】，I didn't prepare for the exam because I played computer games too much those days【高分句型一，注意状语从句的使用】，which made my parents and you  worried．I will never forget that day when you talked with me face to face【高分句型二，注意定语从句的使用】．It's a pity that I failed an exam but I am happy that I learned a lesson from this failure with your help．That is，no pains no gains．Hard work leads to success and no one can have a harvest without any effort．Therefore，I will study harder than ever．I won't waste my valuable time any more．【正文部分详细介绍老师怎么帮助你】
Now we are about to graduate，I want to say thanks to you，my dear teacher．【结尾紧扣主题】
Best wishes!

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．