Question

14．下面是《小艾，爸爸特别特别想你》这本书的两幅插图．图中描绘了父亲陪伴小艾成 长的童年片段．父亲快到了，请结合自己的经历，以"爸爸，我想对你说…"开头，写一 篇英语短文，以表达对父亲的爱与感激之情．
要求：1．文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；
2．语句通顺，结构合理，书写规范；
3．词数：80词左右．短文开头部分己给出，不计入总词数．

Dad，I want to say to you．In the past few years，you have done a lot for me．We spent much happy time together．With your great care，I grow healthily and happily．I remember when I was ill，you took me to the hospital immediately and took good care of me without a rest during the whole night．I remember you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me．I remember when I got good grades，you were always smiling…But now，you're getting older and older．So I want to say：Please have a good rest and relax．Thank you for your love．I love you forever．．

Answer 1

分析 本题主要是一篇图画作文．是一篇表达对父亲的爱与感激之情的作文．首先要弄清楚图画提供的信息，然后适当发挥自己的想象力和创造力，来完成这篇文章．
1．人称：题目可知，写作时用第一人称．
2．时态：回忆往事，一般过去时态为主；现在想要说的话，以一般现在时态为主．
3．内容要点：回忆往事（根据图画提示，看适当发挥．）；感恩父爱．
4．主要短语：
take care of 关心，爱护；
take sb to+地点，带某人去某地；
get good grades 取得好成绩；
have a good rest 好好休息；
高分句型：
1．I remember you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me．我记得您经常带我到有趣的地方，给我买美味的食物．
这是一个含有宾语从句的复合句．
主句：I remember；宾语从句：you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me．
2．You're getting older and older．
您越来年纪越大了．
同一词的比较级，用and连接，表示越来越…
例如：hotter and hotter 越来越热．

解答 参考范文：
Dad，I want to say to you．（开篇点题）
   In the past few years，you have done a lot for me．We spent much happy time together．With your great care，I grow healthily and happily．I remember when I was ill，you took me to the hospital immediately and took good care of me without a rest during the whole night．【高分句型一】I remember you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me．I remember when I got good grades，you were always smiling…．（回忆往事）
【高分句型二】But now，you're getting older and older．So I want to say：Please have a good rest and relax．Thank you for your love．I love you forever．（感恩父爱）

点评 本题主要考查图画作文．写此类题目的作文，首先审题：要读懂画面内容和所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体，以及写作的人称和时态．然后读图列提纲：抓住文章的中心，根据图画信息，列出提纲．然后根据内容，考虑所要选用的单词，短语，句型．最后再修改，润色全文．