题目内容
14．假如你是Simon，你购买了某公司生产的手机，但出现故障．请根据下列要点，给该公司售后服务部写一封电子邮件．| 存在问题 | 1买了两个半月． 花了1000多元钱． 2上周出现问题．不能发短信，也不能打电话． 3前几天去店里让人修理，被告知不值得维修．换新手机至少等三个月． |
| 感受和要求 | 1I feel… 2I hope… |
2短文应把表格中所示内容表达完整，句式规范，字迹工整；
3省略部分作2-3句合理发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯．
Dear Sir，
I am writing to you for the mobile phone by your company．
．
Thank you for your attention．
Yours sincerely
Simon．
分析 这是一篇提纲作文．时态 以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．其次考生可从 两个个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：存在的问题；感受和要求
重点短语：
1．two and a half months 两个半月
2．more than 多于
3．go wrong 出故障
4．send text messages 发短信
5．at least 至少
高分句型：
1．I have had it for two and a half months．我已经买了两个半月了．"for+时间段"用于现在完成时，表示动作持续的时间段．
2．I had it fixed in the shop the other day．前几天我去商店找人修理．have sth．done 表示"找别人做某事"
3．I was told that it was not worth fixing 我被告知（手机）不值得修理．一般过去时的被动语态：was/were+动词的过去分词
解答 I am writing to you for the mobile phone by your company．
I have had it for two and a half months（高分句型）．It cost me more than one thousand yuan（买了两个半月． 花了1000多元钱．）．But it went wrong last week．I couldn't send text messages and I couldn't make phone calls，either．（上周出现问题．不能发短信，也不能打电话．）I had it fixed in the shop the other day（高分句型）．I was told that it was not worth fixing（高分句型）．If I want to change a new one，I need to wait for at least three months（前几天去店里让人修理，被告知不值得维修．换新手机至少等三个月．）．I feel sorry that I have bought a mobile phone like this．I hope to have a new one，or I want my money back．（感受和要求）
点评 这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般过去时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．
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A：No work？Who will do the work？
B：（72）G
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B：（73）B No teachers．
A：Mmm．No work and no teachers．What other things will people do？
B：（74）A
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B：To the moon!
A：The moon？Won't they take vacations on the earth？
B：No．（75）D
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A：（72）E I also want to buy one like yours．
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B：Oh，I see．Maybe you can try dark blue or dark green．
A：All right．（75）B
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