Question

根据下列短语的提示以How to keep healthy?为题写一篇80词左右的短文。

do more exercise, get up early, not stay up, keep the air fresh, have healthy eating habits

How to keep healthy?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

one possible version；

How to keep healthy?

Health is important to everyone. Do you know how to keep healthy?

First, we should do more exercise. Sports can keep us fit. Second, we should have enough sleep. It’s good for us to go to bed early and get up early. Third, we should have healthy eating habits. We’d better have more vegetables, and less meat. Finally, we should keep our rooms clean and the air fresh all the time.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，作文题目已经给出，而且列出了要求。写作文时要仔细审题，每一条都要写到，注意前后句的连接，不要遗漏要点，必要时可适当发挥。本文时态主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称we。写作中适当使用情态动词和连词，注意要上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】文章主要说明如何保持身体健康，重点短语都已经写出，如do more exercise, get up early, not stay up, keep the air fresh, have healthy eating habits写作时运用first、second等表顺序的词，使文章的层次清楚，并且增加了一些内容使文章更通顺，更符合要求。如It’s good for…. We’d better……在平时的学习中，要注意点滴积累，这样在写作文时才能灵活运用。

考点：话题作文。