Question

4．要求：句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯．
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：1．引出该话题，写出自我．

Answer 1

分析 学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力．就学校安全教育周收集的自我保护小贴士，写一篇关于自我保护的作文．在写作时要表达清楚，信息完整，语言通顺，语意连贯．充分利用好提示语言，使作文结构完整．

解答 How Can We Protect Ourselves
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers．But how can we protect ourselves？Here are some of my suggestions．
First，we should be careful when we make friends，especially online．Second，if we are in danger，we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe．Also，we ought to eat healthily and safely．Besides，we shouldn't crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school．Last but not least，summer is coming，we must remember it's dangerous to swim alone．
In short，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger．
【亮点说明】这是一篇很贴近学生生活的作文，对于安全问题，不容忽视．作者围绕所给提示语展开了写作，比较成功．文中还用到了不少短语，make friends，in danger，call…for…，in time，so that，ought to，go upstairs or downstairs，stay away from等，为作文增添了色彩．
考点：提示性作文．

点评 解答这种题目时，我们应该仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点． 要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写． 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯． 在平常的学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩．