Question

如今，在我们身边，父母均在外打工的留守儿童比比皆是。关注留守儿童（left-behind children），构建和谐社会的重要内容。关注留守儿童，要靠全社会的共同努力。你认为留守儿童面临的主要问题有那些？为了解决留守儿童的问题，请你向当地政府提建议：提示：1.缺乏父母的关爱(be short of love)，性格孤僻(lonely)，学习压力大、自卑。2.缺乏安全保障，缺乏家庭关爱（families' care），容易犯错误甚至犯罪（do some thing against the laws）。

建议：1.学校建立留守儿童心里咨询室（Psychological Counseling Room），老师应该把爱播撒到每一

个留守儿童的心田。2.政府利用节假日建立留守儿童家长学校（ parents 'school for these children）。 3.社会各界开展与留守儿童一帮一结对子的活动（hand-in-hand activity） 。4.父母尽可能回到孩子身边，给孩子生活上和学习上的帮助和关爱。

表达要求：语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁、字数不少于80个。

Dear Mayor:

I'm a middle school student. I'm writing to tell you something around us.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Mayor:

I'm a middle school student. I'm writing to tell you something around us. Nowadays, there are many-left-behind children whose parents work away from their hometowns. Most of them are from the countryside, you know, they have many problem. They are always lonely and stressed out because they are short of their parents' love. At the same time, they are easy to make mistakes even do some thing against the laws, because they're short of their families' care. How to solve their problems? In my eyes, the government can set up a parents school for these children on holidays, you can organize "hand-in-hand" activity to call on more people to help them. You can also raise money to donate to these children. As the song says: "If everyone gives their love, the world will be better." It's very important for us to pay more attention to these children if we want to build a harmonious society.

Best wishes to you!

【解析】

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【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

考点：提示性作文