Question

【题目】紧张而又忙碌的初中生活即将结束，在装载你收获的行囊----成长记录袋中还应增添一份你自己满意的答案。

根据上述提示，请以“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”为题写一篇文章，记录你难忘的校园生活。首句已给出。

注意：. 1.语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

2. 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名或能够透露你个人身份的相关信息。

3.词数80左右，信件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

My Unforgettable Junior High School Life

How time flies!

Answer 1

【答案】How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.

In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. I got on well with my classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball / football / volleyball. But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.

In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.

【解析】

这篇短文要求我们以My Unforgettable Junior High School Life为题，回想一下自己即将过去的初中，讲述难忘的初中生活。题目中用思维导图，列出了一些文章中会用到的关键词，供学生们参考使用。审题可知，这篇短文应以一般过去时、第一人称为主来叙述。题目中并没有给出具体的写作内容，学生们应发挥自己的想象力，可以从自己的学习、爱好、与同学的交往、与老师的相处以及自己的感受等方面进行详细阐述。写作时应注意：首先要展开合理想象，补充文章细节内容，注意各部分内容之间的层次，内容要完整、充实，结构要清晰。其次应注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译。句子的结构要完整，可以简单句结构为主，如主谓宾或主系表结构。为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句、复合句及其他复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。