题目内容
20.你班下周将转来一个日本学生Yuri,你是班长,班主任要求你向新生介绍班级、学校和当地生活的基本情况,以帮助她尽快适应.请你根据下面表格中的要点拟写介绍词.要求:1.内容涵盖所有要点.2.适当发挥充实. 3.不少于80字.
| 班级 | 40个学生,12个老师,人都很好. |
| 学校 | 上午8点到校,4点放学,一天6节课,作业不太多. 中午在校用餐,吃得健康,有米饭、蔬菜、水果、肉类等.午饭后有一小时可以聊天、听音乐. 放学后,各种课外活动,… |
| 生活 | 学校附近有一些大型商场和超市,物美价廉,其中一家商场顶楼有很多餐馆和一家大型影院.还有公交站台,乘车很方便. 人们这些天忙于为春节做准备,一些…,一些…. |
分析 高分句型一
There are 40 students and 12 teachers in our class. 我们班有40个学生和12个老师.这是there be 句型,表示某地有某物.
高分句型二
People are busy preparing for the Spring Festival these days这些天人们忙着准备春节.be busy doing sth.忙于做某事.
解答 Hi,Yuri,welcome!I am the monitor of our class.Let me tell you something about our class,schooland life in our hometown.【开头点明主题】
There are 40 students and 12 teachers in our class【高分句型一,注意there be 句型的使用】.They are very kind and friendly.
We should arrive at school at 8:00am.School is over at 4pm.We have 6 classes a day and we don't have much homework.We have lunch at school.We eat healthy food.We have rice,vegetables,fruits and meat for lunch.After lunch we have one hour to chat and listen to music.After school we have many activities.We can play basketall,dance and sing.
There are some malls and supermarkets near our school.The things there are at good price.There are many restaurants and a big cinema on the top of one of the malls.There are also some bus stops hereand you can take buses easily.
People are busy preparing for the Spring Festival these days【高分句型二,注意be busy doing sth.句型的使用】.Some are shopping and some are cleaning taheir houses.【正文部分详细介绍班级情况】
I am sure you will have fun here.【结尾紧扣主题】
点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but,so,then等.
| 好处 | 1.能获取更多、更新的知识; 2.方便和朋友发邮件聊天. |
| 坏处 | 1.长时间上网影响身体健康和视力; 2.沉迷游戏会影响学习. |
| 建议 | 1.在校学习期间不要上网; 2.把电脑当成有用工具(tool),而不是玩具. |
2.80词左右.开头已给出,不计入总词数.
| Name, | Frank, |
| Age | 12岁 |
| Date of birth | 8月15日 |
| Members of his family | 父母,一个兄弟一个姐姐 |
| Eating habits | 喜欢米饭,鸡肉以及蔬菜水果 |
| Hobbies(爱好) | 篮球,排球 |
| Favorite subjects | 英语,历史 |
| E-mail address | frank007@163.com |
2.要点不要遗漏,可适当发挥使行文通顺.
3.字数50-60.开头和结尾已给出,不记入总词数.
My classmate
Hello,everyone.I'll introduce one of my classmates to you.
He is 12 years old.His birthday is on August 15.He has parents,a brother and a sister.He has good eating habits.He likes rice,chicken,vegetables and fruit.He likes playing basketball and volleyball.His favorite subjects are English and history.His E-mail is frank007@163.com.I hope he will be one friend of yours.Thank you!
| 亲身经历 | 1.我们玩得正开心,不文明的一幕发生了:一位女士满不在乎将垃圾扔在地上; 2.我试图阻止,但她拒绝听我的; 3.我将垃圾捡起来并扔进垃圾桶; |
| 我的观点 | 4.人人都应该学习一些有关礼仪方面的知识; 5.列举不同场合须有的文明行为; 6.对我们来说,提升礼仪是必须的. |
2.第5点须用2~3句话展开合理想象,做适当发挥;
3.词数80个左右,短文标题和开头已在答题卷上给出,不计入总词数.
| Name | Jenny Smith |
| Age(年龄) | 13 |
| Birthday | October first |
| Telephone number | 358-6344 |
| Like to eat | bread,chicken,tomatoes,apples |
| Favorite subject | English |
| Favorite sports | basketball,volleyball |
2、语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范,词数50个左右.