Question

14．根据中文和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文．请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名．
某英文报纸以"A Good Sentence to Me"为题征文，请你投稿．请你从下面的三句话中选出你最喜欢的一句，并结合自己的经历谈谈你喜欢它的理由．

☆The more we read，the more we will know．
☆Helping others is one of the gifts we have to give in life．
☆If we're not making mistakes，then we're not doing anything．
A Good Sentence to Me
"If we're not making mistakes，then we're not doing anything．"This is my favorite sentence because from it I have learned that if we are afraid of making mistakes，we will never experiment．
One day，I wanted to cook lunch by myself．But it was really a hard job because I had never cooked before．I didn't know anything about cooking times，and as a result，I overcooked my lunch．It tasted terrible．When my mom came back home，I told her my story．She said，"It's OK．You did it anrway．"
I think that I had a chance to understand the valuable role that mistakes play in life and making mistakes is the key to learning．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  This is my favorite sentence because from it I have learned that if we are afraid of making mistakes，we will never experiment．     这是我最喜欢的句子，因为从中我知道如果我们害怕犯错误，我们就永远不会尝试．这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时．
 高分句型二
When my mom came back home，I told her my story  当我妈妈回家的时候，我告诉她我的故事．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．

解答 A Good Sentence to Me
"If we're not making mistakes，then we're not doing anything．"This is my favorite sentence because from it I have learned that if we are afraid of making mistakes，we will never experiment．【高分句型一，注意状语从句的使用】【开头点明主题】
One day，I wanted to cook lunch by myself．But it was really a hard job because I had never cooked before．I didn't know anything about cooking times，and as a result，I overcooked my lunch．It tasted terrible．When my mom came back home，I told her my story【高分句型二，注意时间状语从句的使用】．She said，"It's OK．You did it anyway．"【正文部分详细介绍自己的经历】
I think that I had a chance to understand the valuable role that mistakes play in life and making mistakes is the key to learning．【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．