Question

16．同学们，在英语学习的过程中你遇到了哪些困难，针对这些问题采取了什么措施，对以后的英语学习有什么计划？请写一段100字左右的短文和大家一起分享吧．
要求：要有与主题相关的适当发挥．字迹工整．表达通顺，得体．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一  
When people talk with me，I can't understand them 当人们和我说话时，我听不懂．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．
高分句型二
I think keeping a diary is a good way to improve it我认为写日记是改善它的好方法．这是一个宾语从句，I think是主句，后面的是宾语从句，宾语从句中keeping a diary 是动名词做主语．

解答 I like English，but I have some difficulties in learning English．When people talk with me，I can't understand them．【高分句型一，注意时间状语从句的使用】【要点一，在英语学习的过程中遇到的困难】In order to improve my listening ability，I often listen to the tape．I dare not speak English in public，so I take part in the English corner．I often do more reading．When I read，I often guess the meanings of the new words and try to get the main idea of the article．I am not good at writing．I think keeping a diary is a good way to improve it【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．【要点二，针对这些问题采取了什么措施】
    I am sure I will make great progress as I work hard at it．【要点三，对以后的英语学习有什么计划】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．