Question

你班计划举行一次以“My dream job”为话题的英文主题班会课，老师要求每位同学写一篇短文，分享各自的“梦想”，内容包括以下几个方面：

1．你梦想做什么工作；

2．你选择这个工作的理由；

3．你为实现这个梦想要做的准备。

注意：1．内容可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；词数70。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2．短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名和人名。

My dream job

Everyone has his dream job. What is my dream job?

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Answer 1

Everyone has his dream job. What is my dream job? My dream is to be a doctor in the future. I think it’s a great and interesting job. Because first I can help many patients. It’s a hard job but I don’t mind it. I can find some joy in this job. Second I think I can also help myself and my family If I can become a doctor in the future so I like my job.Third I think I can learn a lot from my job because I have to learn some related subjects if I want to be a doctor. Besides ,I can meet different people in my job every day and I can learn something from them. And I would like to hard at my lessons to prepare to be a doctor. I believe I can be a good doctor

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如I think I can learn a lot from my job because I have to learn some related subjects if I want to be a doctor .I would like to hard at my lessons to prepare to be a doctor等，Because等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理.

考点：话题作文。