Question

14．最近你结识了一位新笔友，请根据以下信息，简单介绍一下你的新笔友．要求不少于50词．
名字：Tom   国籍：美国        居住地：纽约     语言：英语和汉语
喜欢的动物：考拉，因为很可爱    喜欢的天气：晴天和雪天
爱好：看报纸，杂志，摄影        梦想：做一名老师．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给材料作文，介绍一个新笔友．本文做给材料比较详细，动笔前先根据材料确定时态，句式，词汇等主要内容．根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称应该是第三人称．写作中注意使用连接词，注意表达的多样化，做到语意连贯符合逻辑．
高分句型：
①In his free time，he likes reading magazines and newspapers．在业余时间，他喜欢看杂志和报纸．句子中like doing sth表示喜欢做某事．
②He wants to be a teacher when he is older，because he thinks it is an interesting job．他长大后想当一名教师，因为他认为这是一项有趣的工作．这里want to do sth表示想做某事，because在这里引导一个原因状语从句．

解答 I am glad that I have a new pen pal．（引出话题） His name is Tom．He is a lovely boy．He comes from American．And now he lives in New York．He speaks English and Chinese．（介绍他的基本信息）His favorite animals are koalas and giraffes，because koalas are very cute and giraffes are very friendly to people．（最喜欢的动物）He enjoys sunny days and snowy days，because she loves sunshine and snow．（最喜欢的天气）In his free time，he likes reading magazines and newspapers（高分句型）．He also likes taking photos．（空闲时最爱做的事情）He wants to be a teacher when he is older，because he thinks it is an interesting job．（高分句型） A teacher is very busy but he likes students．（理想）
   I like Tom very much and I hope his dream will come true!（祝愿）

点评 在写书面表达是首先要注意的问题就是人称，不能混淆人称；其次，应注意动词的英语，根据不同的人称确定动词的形式；再次，句型应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后，用自己熟练掌握的句型造句．