Question

10．为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议．假如你是王宏，用英语给校长写一篇不少于60词的建议信．

注意：文中应包含所有要点，并适当发挥；不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．这些天我们在谈论如何过上更好的学校生活．句子中talk about表示谈论的意思，how+to引导的不定式在这里作宾语．
②What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．更重要的是，我希望他们能给我们少布置点作业，按时下课．句子中What's more表示更重要的是；hope后面跟的是一个宾语从句，on time表示按时．

解答 Dear Headmaster，
These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．（高分句型）Here are some of my suggestions．（引出话题） First，I hope our school will open the library more often．Second，I think our school can organize more after-class activities．Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．（对学校提出的建议）
As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting．And if they can talk less and more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practise．What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．（高分句型）（对老师们提出的建议）
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．（我的希望）
Yours sincerely，
Wang Hong

点评 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封建议信．给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点．写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误．注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯，为了使说明更具逻辑性，适当使用序数词．