Question

14．假如你是李英，在即将毕业之际，你的英语老师Mr Smith要求你们每人给他写一封英文书信作纪念，信的内容包括下列三方面内容：
1、你对Mr Smith的整体印象；（kind，warm-hearted，helpful，hardworking …）
2、简述一次经历或一件事；（help，give up，keep…）
3、你的感受或愿望．（thankful，lucky，proud…）
（信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入短文内；括号里的英文提示供选用）
Dear Mr Smith，
How are you？It's a pity that I'm leaving this school soon．At the moment I really want to say"Thank you very much．"              ．
Best wishes to you!
                                                       Yours Li Ying．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
You are always working hard and try to help us when we are in trouble．
句中涉及短语有"be always doing sth 总是做某事"、"try to do sth 尽力做某事"、"be in trouble 处于困境"．这句话意为：你总是辛勤工作，当我们有困难的时候尽力帮我们．
高分句型二：
Little by little，I've become interested in English and I'm now good at it．
句中涉及的短语有"little by little 逐渐地"、"become interested in sth  对…变得有兴趣"、"be good at…擅长…"．这句话意为：逐渐地，我开始对英语感兴趣了．现在我很擅长英语．

解答 Dear Mr Smith，
  How are you？It's a pity that I'm leaving this school soon．At the moment I really want to say"Thank you very much．"You have done a lot for us since you came to our school．You are always working hard and try to help us when we are in trouble．【高分句型一】（表达感激）
I still remember，when I began to learn English，I found it too difficult．No matter how hard I tried，I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up．As soon as you found my problem，you had a talk with me about how to learn English well．Since then you have kept helping me．Little by little，I've become interested in English and I'm now good at it．【高分句型二】（回忆旧事）
  I think I am so lucky to become one of your students．I've learned a lot from you．I will try to help others when they are in trouble．I hope that you can stay in China longer and have more Chinese students．（表达祝福）
  Best wishes to you!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Ying

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．