Question

18．今年春节晚会上，很多人加入了抢红包游戏活动，但也有人表示担忧．假如你叫李华，你班最近开展了一个有关抢红包游戏活动的调查．请你用英文给学校校刊《英语园地》写一封信，介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点．

70%学生参加抢红包游戏活动
75%学生表示赞成	1．带来更多乐趣 2．结识更多的朋友 3．…
25%学生表示担忧	1．花费太多的时间 2．和家人交流少 3．…
你的观点…	…

注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3．词数：80左右，信件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：抢红包grabbing red packets
Dear Editor，
I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of"Grabbing red packets"in our class．
About 70% of the students took part in the game in my class．About 75% of them think it can bring them more fun and they can make more friends．However，about 25% of them are worried about the activity．They say some people spend too much time grapping red packets．Moreover，they don't have enough communication with their family members．As a result，they may feel a little lonely．
I think this game is really exciting，but we should spend more time communicating with our family members．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是介绍抢红包游戏的调查的结果并谈谈你的观点．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1 70%学生参加抢红包游戏活动
2 75%学生表示赞成：带来更多乐趣；结识更多的朋友
3.25%学生表示担忧：花费太多的时间；和家人交流少
4．我的观点
常用到的重点短语：
take part in 参加
make friends 交朋友
be worried about 担心
spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事
【高分句型】
1．About 75% of them think①it can bring them more fun ②and they can make more friends．
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句
②and连接两个句子．make friends 交朋友
2．Moreover，they don't have enough communication with their family members．
moreover此外，引出下一个观点
3．I think ①this game is really exciting，②but we should spend more time communicating with our family members
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句
②but但是，表转折．
spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事

解答 Dear Editor，
I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of"Grabbing red packets"in our class．About 70% of the students took part in the game in my class．（70%学生参加抢红包游戏活动）About 75% of them think it can bring them more fun and they can make more friends．【高分句型】However，about 25% of them are worried about the activity．They say some people spend too much time grapping red packets．Moreover，they don't have enough communication with their family members．【高分句型】As a result，they may feel a little lonely．
I think this game is really exciting，but we should spend more time communicating with our family members．【高分句型】
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 本图表所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并需有适当发挥．要注意句式的多样性，适当的使用宾语从句，转折词however，连词and等．考生可在作文之前对每部分列出大致的提纲，做到主题明确，条理清楚．可以根据所给提纲或已知信息列出每段的主题句，为全文的展开做好铺垫．注意行文连贯，书写规范，不要出现一些诸如语法或词汇的错误．