Question

我市今年举办主题为“把希望带给贫困孩子”的活动。现在请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下（括号中的词汇可供参考）：

1、许多贫困家庭无力负担孩子去上学；（afford）

2、孩子们没有足够的钱去买学习用品和衣物；（school things and clothes）

3、每个孩子都应该有上学的权力；（have the right to do something）

4、我们应该尽最大的努力去帮助他们，比如……； （try one's best to do something）

5、让我们一起给贫困孩子创造一个更美好的未来。（work together）

注意：

1、文章开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；

2、词数80左右。

Dear students,

In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school.

Thanks for your joining!

 

 

 

Students' Union

 

Answer 1

Dear students,

In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. Because their family can't afford to send them to school. At the same time, children don't have enough money to buy school things and clothes. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for them. So we should try our best to do something to help them, just like giving them school things, clothes and so on. We believe that if we work together, we can make a better future for them. Thanks for your joining!

Students' Union

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要以学生会的名义写的一份倡议书。全文主要用一般现在时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 out of school.,At the same time, In my opinion, go to school,try our best to d,and so on,Thanks for 等短语，文中还用到了时间状语从句 if we work together；宾语从句 that if we work together, we can make a better future for them。文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文