Question

15．假如你是Tina，请你写一封电子邮件给你的朋友Bob，向他讲述你的假期情况．内容包括：1去昆明度假了，在昆明的情况（人，环境，天气等）2 在昆明的活动计划和安排（至少3项活动）．3 你的感受． 4 询问bob的假期情况以及告诉他你在期待他的回信．作文要求：语句连贯，词数60个左右．
Dear Bob，
How is it going？I am writing to tell you about my vacation．                        
Yours，
Tina

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I am writing to tell you about my vacation．我写信是想告诉你我的假期．句子中write to do sth表示写信去做某事．
②I hope you can write to me soon and tell me about you vacation．我希望你能尽快给我写信告诉我你的假期．句子中hope后面跟的是一个宾语从句．

解答 Dear Bob，
How is it going？I am writing to tell you about my vacation（高分句型）．（引出话题）
My family and I went to Kunming on vacation．It was warm and sunny here and the people here are friendly to us．It was beautiful here．We all like this place because the weather was always good and there were kinds of flowers．（在昆明的情况）
    We went sighting and tasted different kinds of food．We climbed Yulong Mountains and took some photos．We went fishing and boating in the beautiful countryside．（在昆明的活动计划和安排）
    We have a relaxing vacation and we all had a good time here．How about you？I hope you can write to me soon and tell me about you vacation（高分句型）．（我的感受及询问Bob的假期情况以及告诉他你在期待他的回信．）
                                                                  Yours，
Tina

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．