Question

【题目】书面表达。
学校将以“Living a healthy life”为主题举办英语演讲比赛。请你根据所给内容及要求用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对健康生活方式的认识。

健康的生活
饮食	养成良好的饮食习惯，多吃蔬菜、水果，少吃肉或糖
运动	骑车或步行上学；
积极参加各种活动，例如，放学后打球、跑步等
作息	保证有足够的睡眠，合理安排时间，早睡早起
卫生	勤洗手，防止疾病的传播；
不随意扔垃圾，勤打扫房间，常开窗来保持空气新鲜

要求：1.文章必须包含所提供的信息，注意符合英语表达习惯；

2．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；

3．100词左右(文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；

4．参考词汇：饮食习惯　eating habit; 疾病　diseases

Living a healthy life

It's important for us to live a healthy life.

In a word, the healthier life we live, the happier we will feel.

Answer 1

【答案】Living a healthy life

It's important for us to live a healthy life.

First of all, we need to form good eating habits. We'd better eat more fruit and vegetables. We shouldn't have too much meat or sugar.

Second, it's necessary for us to do more exercise. We can ride or walk to school. We should take an active part in all kinds of activities. For example, we can play ball games. We can also run after school.

Third, it's important for us to have enough sleep. So we should plan our time carefully so that we can go to bed early and get up early.

Last, keeping clean is also important. We must wash our hands often so that we can stop some diseases from spreading. We shouldn't drop litter here and there. What's more, it's necessary for us to clean our rooms every day. We can open the windows to keep the air fresh.

In a word, the healthier life we live, the happier we will feel.

【解析】

写作思路：本文是写Living a healthy life，文章可以分为三个部分，首先开篇点题，提出健康生活的重要性。接下来按照题目所给信息，列举怎样才能保持健康。最后对以上内容加以总结，做到收尾呼应。时态运用一般现在时。本篇文章首先以It's important for us to live a healthy life. 开篇点题，说明健康生活的重要性，接下来用到first, second, third, last 一一列举要想保持健康，我们需要做到哪些事情，使文章思路清晰，也具有连贯性。其中还用到We'd better….We should…, it's necessary for us to ….., 等表示建议的多种句型，运用恰到好处，也避免了句型的单调性。最后用In a word…..做最后的总结，和文章第一段做到收尾呼应，是一篇非常优秀的文章。