Question

【题目】书面表达

2018年1月以来，琼海市开始推广使用共享单车，你对这一举措有什么看法？请根据下面的表格提示内容写一篇短文，谈谈共享单车的利弊及使用共享单车的建议，以便在英语课上与同学们交流。

shared bikes	advantages: save energy, air pollution
	disadvantages: park in wrong places, bike accidents
	suggestions: follow the traffic rules, care for bikes, don’t bring home

要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；

2. 必须包含所给提示，但不要逐字翻译，并做适当发挥；

3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；

4. 词数80左右。(文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)

Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think …

What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?

Answer 1

【答案】Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think it’s a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes it’s hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Don’t bring it home or keep it your own. What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，what’s more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。而As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes.等多种插入语句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。