Question

【题目】书面表达 (计20分)

为进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。

注意： 1． 内容必须包括所给的全部要点, 可适当发挥．

2． 表达清楚, 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写规范；

3． 100字左右, 文章开头已给出, 不计入总词汇．

参考词汇： be careful, on line, danger, call ．．． for …, go bad (变坏)

How to keep safe

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind． But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions．

First,_______________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

How to keep safe

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.

First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Finally, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.

In short, safety must come first!

【解析】

试题这是一篇给材料作文，本文只给出了主要写作要点。写作中要注意从四个方面进行叙述，并自己补充一到两点。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。写作中注意使用连接词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系

写作亮点：这篇短文就如何保持安全展，文中主要从4个方面来介绍，文中使用一些好的句型如：we should be careful when we make friends；Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health给文章增色不少。