Question

【题目】 书面表达

请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。

一直以来，同学们对作业持有不同的观点。在你班的主题班会上，同学们进行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的讨论，请你根据提示和要求，并结合自己的实际经验，发表你的观点。

Yes	No
Help us understand what we have learned； Practice makes prefect；...	Take up too much time； Make us less interested in studying；...
Your opinion：

要求：

1．80词以上。

2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear students，

I'm glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it's necessary for us to do daily homework.

Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．

In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn't be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.

That's all. Thanks.

【解析】写作审题之后能明白写作任务是要写出一篇小论文，讨论每日的作业到底是不是必要的。首先需要陈述正反两方面的观点，其次结合自己的实际经验，发表自己的观点。写作过程中要注意逻辑准确，注意正确使用连词，借助实例、实际经验来佐证自己的观点。

写作亮点：首先用一个自然段来阐明写作的主题，表达出自己的观点（认为作业是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…这样的句型。其次，开始具体陈述观点，陈述的时候要适当使用实例，相关用到的短语有have some difficulties in doing在做…的时候有困难，review the knowledge复习知识，think over the difficulties来回思考难点，Little by little一点一点地。恰当的谚语也为文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧这个谚语。最后可以用说理的方式来介绍做作业的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我们的技能，在这里也有一点亮点，就是说作业也要有变化性，要丰富多彩，体现了作者的深度思考，总体来说出色地完成了既定的写作任务。