Question

【题目】最近《朗读者》、《中国诗词大会》等文化类节目唤醒了中国人的阅读情结。为了激发市民们阅读兴趣，广州从4月份开始开展“书香羊城”活动。请根据以下的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你对阅读的看法，并对培养阅读习惯和开展班级阅读活动方面提出建议。

注意:1.词数80词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入词数

2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予给分

3.参考词《朗读者》----Readers

The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou ”is beginning held in Guangzhou from April,2017.

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Answer 1

【答案】The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou” is being held in Guangzhou from April ,2017. Reading makes us a wise man. It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness.

Keeping reading every day is a good habit. We should spend at least twenty minutes in reading after class. What’s more, try to make notes for good points while reading. We can also hold some reading activities in our class. For example, watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class .

【解析】【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如not only…but also，help sb. do sth.，every day，at least，after class，what’s more，try to do，in our class，for example，such as，set up，so that等。而It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness./ What’s more, try to make notes for good points while reading / For example, watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers.等多种复杂从句结构的运用和插入语的使用更是为文章增色不少。