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【题目】近日，一位女儿为从未出过国的父母手绘过海关图，感动无数人，微友纷纷转发点赞。假设你是在北京工作的英国人Jim，伦敦的父母将在元旦来北京看你。你准备给父母写封信，介绍北京和家乡的不同，消除父母的紧张，也让父母顺利过“关”。

要求：1.字数80左右。2.须包含以下内容。3.书信开头结尾已给，不计入字数。

小小关卡	过关妙招
1.语言关	可以通过看电视/电影、听中国歌曲、请教中国留学生等方法学习简单的中文
2.环境关	北京在中国的北方，冬天比家乡伦敦干燥和寒冷，多带保暖衣服
3.人文关	中国首都，人口最多的城市之一(超过2千万),比伦敦多，人们更友好
4.娱乐关	可以游玩名胜古迹，品尝北京美食，欣赏京剧等；出行推荐地铁-最便宜最快；各种健身运动

参考词汇：dry干燥，capital首都, places of interest 名胜古迹

Dear parents,

How is it going? I’m glad to hear that you are coming to China

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Yours,

Jim

Answer 1

【答案】Dear parents,

How is it going? I’m glad to hear that you are coming to China

I know you have difficulty in speaking and living. So I am writing to offer you help. You can improve your Chinese by watching Chinese films or TV and listening to Chinese songs. You may ask Chinese overseas students for help. Because Beijing is in the north of China, it is much colder and drier than your hometown. Remember to take some warm clothes. Besides, Beijing’ population is more than London, and people there are friendlier. There are many places of interest and delicious food ,so you will have a pleasant journey. You travel by underground. It is the cheapest way. You may do many sports.

I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours,

Jim

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇书信作文，也是材料作文。考生首先要认真阅读提示，并认真审题，把提示内容要点写清，可适当发挥，文中内容要连贯。我们应运用正确的熟悉的英语句子写出怎样节的过程。把我们熟悉的素材，要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，最好使用我们熟悉和背过的句型，尽量不要使用复杂的从句，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文。内容要点完整、应用词汇灵活准确，句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，上下文连贯。内容覆盖所有要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇，注意了连词和时态的使用，没有语言错误。