Question

假设你是王芬，段考后你将作为优秀学生代表在家长会上发言。请你根据以下的几点写出你的演讲稿，给同学和家长们一些好的建议。（不少于60词）

要点提示：1. 学生应制定学习计划

2. 多读有益的书，多参加活动；少玩游戏，看电视

3. 和老师同学和睦相处

4. 回家多和父母沟通，帮忙做家务

5. 父母不要给孩子太大压力。

要求：1.语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥。2.不能出现你的真实姓名，学校及班级。

Hello, everyone, I am Wang Fen. I’m very glad to talk with you.

 

 

 

Answer 1

Hello, everyone, I am Wang Fen. I’m very glad to talk with you。Here are some ways of learning well。First，t is very important and necessary for us to make a good study plan. It's generally considered that reading do a lot of benefit to our students.Not only can it make our after-school life more meaningful and corlourful. You should participate in all kinds of social activities,such as going to parties and dancing balls,and we should spend less time on computer games and TV,At school,we get along well with our teachers and classmates.After school,we communicate with our parents ,and help them with the housework.And the pparents shouln’t push the children hard.

【解析】

试题分析：试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的时态，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍学习的建议。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如t is very important and necessary for us to make a good study plan。you should participate in all kinds of social activities,such as going to parties and dancing balls,.等。At school等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。