Question

5．仔细观察图中乘客在公交车上的举止，参考所提供的短语写一篇短文．
talk loudly on the phone，smoke on the bus，drop litter，stand close to each other，be not allowed，feel uncomfortable，It is better to…，social behavior，…

提示：
1．短文内容包括对图中乘客在公交车上的举止描述和你的建议四条．
2．词数80个左右．短文开头已写好，不计入总词数．
3．文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息．
Impolite manners can be seen in public places quite often．Here is a situation from a No.56bus．A man with a handbag on his knees （膝盖）istalking on the phone louldly，a tall man is smoking，the other two men are talking loudly，a woman is eating on her seat and she dropped a lot of litter．I think everyone should obey the bus regulations，it is not allowed to smoke on the bus．Itisbetternot totalkloudly，or others will feeluncomfortable．We should not droplitter on the bus．Buses are public places，and everyone should pay attention to their social behavior．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  I think everyone  should obey the bus regulations．我认为每个人都应该遵守公车管理规定．I think是主句，后面的是宾语从句．
高分句型二
it is not allowed to smoke on the bus．在公共汽车上是不允许抽烟的．it is not allowed to do sth．不允许做某事．

解答 Impolite manners can be seen in public places quite often．Here is a situation from a No.56 bus．A man with a handbag on his knees （膝盖）is talking on the phone louldly，a tall man is smoking，the other two men are talking loudly，a woman is eating on her seat and she dropped a lot of litter．【要点一，对图中乘客在公交车上的举止描述】I think everyone  should obey the bus regulations【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】，it is not allowed to smoke on the bus【高分句型二，注意固定句型的使用】．It is better not to  talk loudly，or others will feel uncomfortable．We should not drop litter on the bus．Buses are public places，and everyone should pay attention to their social behavior．【要点二，建议】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．