Question

以“Animals, our friends!”为题写一篇短文。

要求：1）70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2）展开自己的想象，可以通过“dogs, cows, hens 等几种动物来进行说明。

3）适当运用get on well with….; get …from…; guide dogs; the blind; milk; hens; eggs; interesting; for example; save 等词汇。

4）意思连贯，语句通顺，书写工整。

Animals, our friends!

It is important to ________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Animals, our friends!

It is important to get on well with animals because some of the animals can give us a lot of help. For example, guide dogs are the eyes of the blind. They help the blind a lot in their daily lives. Cows provide 

us with milk. We get eggs from hens every day. Some of the animals are very interesting. Animals are our friends. I can’t imagine a world without animals. But animals are fewer and fewer. Let’s do something to save them.

【解析】

试题分析：本书面表达是写动物是我们的朋友，所以写作时，应叙述与动物相处的重要性，以及如何与动物相处。注意书写时进行举例说明；注意人称的运用，以及时态应该用一般现在时。应该将提示语合理运用。还应注意表达的层次性，以及连词的运用。

考点：本题考查提纲作文

点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式，但也尽量不要用单一的句型。