Question

书面表达

假如昨天你们班以“Should We Keep Animals in Zoos? ”为开展了一次英语讨论，请根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的报道，介绍讨论会的大概情况，第一句已给出，不计入词数。

20 students	Should keep animals in zoo	人们可以在动物园里看到很多种类的动物(all kinds of )。 动物们在动物园里可以得到很好的照顾(take good care of)。
30 students	Shouldn’t keep animals in zoo	动物们被关在笼子(keep in the cage)里，无法获得自由(get freedom)。 动物喜欢生活在自然环境中(live in the nature)
Your opinion	…	…

Yesterday we had a discussion about if we should keep animals in zoos.  ____________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Yesterday we had a discussion about if we should keep animals in zoos. Twenty of us thought that animals should be kept in zoos. Then we can see different kinds of animals there and all the animals will be taken good care of. Thirty students had a different opinion. They thought that animals shouldn’t’t be kept in zoos，because animals come from the nature and they love to live in the natural environment . If they are kept in the cages, they can’t move here and there. Keeping animals in cages is really bad for them.

【解析】

试题分析: 本题要求写一篇关于动物园养动物的议论文。给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，写作中注意应用材料中所给的短语及句式。结合材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称问题比较复杂，注意主谓一致问题。注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。