Question

【题目】根据要求完成大作文，词数：60---80词左右；（15分）

现在的科技日新月异，各种发明以及高科技产品成为了我们生活中不可缺少的东西，如电脑、笔记本电脑(laptop)、手机(mobile phone)、MP4、数码相机(digital camera)、数码摄影机(DV)等。请以My favorite invention为题描述你最喜欢的一种发明，并说明理由(理由至少有两个方面)。

My Favorite Invention

Answer 1

【答案】

My Favorite Invention

Among all the modern inventions, the laptop is my favorite one. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21st century. Laptops are light and small. They are easy to carry. With a laptop, we can work,study and entertain everywhere. A laptop can get to the Internet outside, which enables us to get the latest information whenever we want. Using a laptop, I can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mails and QQ at any time and in any place. I think in the future, everybody will have his or her own laptop.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为我最喜欢的发明，具体内容包括发明的种类，我最喜欢的类别，喜欢此类发明的原因，此类发明物发明的时间，以及对于我们生活的改变，以及对我自身的价值和意义，在写作时应注意符合题意，同时应注意语言的准确性和连贯性。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语，如，With a laptop，A laptop can get to the Internet outside, which enables us to get the latest information whenever we want. Using a laptop等。