Write a story in at least 60words according to the following pictures on the topic A new story of the tortoise and the hare ．(根据下面的图片提示.以龟兔新传为题.写一个不少于60个单词的故事．)(注意:短文中不得不出现任何人名.校名及其它相关� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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7．Write a story in at least 60words according to the following pictures on the topic"A new story of the tortoise and the hare"．（根据下面的图片提示，以"龟兔新传"为题，写一个不少于60个单词的故事．）
（注意：短文中不得不出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）

The following words and phrases are for reference only．（以下单词和短语仅供参考）
turn …．over heavy rain rescue rooftop（屋顶） helples．
Oneday，haremettortoise．Hesaid，"Doyoudaretohavearacewithmeagain？Let'shavearaceagain，OK？"Thetortoiseagreed．
WhenMr．Bearshotthegun，theybegantorun．Inordertowin，hareplayedatrickonturtlebyturningtheturtleover．Whilerunning．Hesaid："You‘dbetterstaywhereyouare．Thenhequicklyranaway．Tortoisehadnowaytogobut towaitforothersforhelp．Luckily，a dogcameby．Hesavedtortoiseatonce．Onturtle'swaytodestination，itsuddenlyrainedheavily．Hessawhareisstandingonarooftop．Harelookedsohelplessthathewasalmostcriedout．Itwaslateandhewantedtogohome．Tortoisecarriedhareonhisbackwithouthesitation．Harewassoregretthatheapologizedtotortoise．Thisstorytellsusthatweshouldrespectourcompetitors．

分析这是一篇图画作文．内容是根据图片提示，以"龟兔新传"为题，写一个的故事，时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．描述图画；兔子将乌龟翻倒，一只狗救了乌龟，赛跑途中下大雨了，兔子在屋顶走不了…
2．故事寓意；

常用到的重点短语：
in order to 为了…
play a trick 恶作剧
had better do sth 最好做某事
see sb．doing sth看见某人正在做某事

【高分句型】
1，①In order to win，hare②played a trick on turtle by turning the turtle over③While running．
①in order to 为了…，做目的状语．
②play a trick on 对…恶作剧．
③while running是while he was running的省略．
2．Tortoise had no way to go but to wait for others for help．
had no way to go but to wait没路可走除了等待．but表示除了…
3．Hare looked so helpless that he was almost cried out．
so …that如此…以至于，that引导结果状语从句．

解答 One day，hare met tortoise．He said，"Do you dare to have a race with me again？Let's have a race again，OK？"The tortoise agreed．
When Mr．Bear shot the gun，they began to run．In order to win，hare played a trick on turtle by turning the turtle over．While running．【高分句型】He said："You‘d better stay where you are． Then he quickly ran away．Tortoise had no way to go but to wait for others for help．【高分句型】Luckily，a dog came by．He saved tortoise at once．On turtle's way to destination，it suddenly rained heavily．He saw hare is standing on a rooftop． Hare looked so helpless that he was almost cried out．【高分句型】It was late and he wanted to go home．Tortoise carried hare on his back without hesitation．Hare was so regret that he apologized to tortoise （描述图画）This story tells us that we should respect our competitors（故事寓意）

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