Question

【题目】针对中学生目前压力大的心理状态,你们班就"中学生的烦恼"进行了一次调查。请根据下面的调查结果写一篇调查报告并提出你的建议。注意：(1) 开头已给出 (不计入总词数) ，你只需接着写；(2) 词数：80左右。
Problems: ①have too much homework 50％
②get bad grades 80％
③parents can't understand them 10％
Advice: 1. listen carefully in class 2. talk to friends or parents 3. ……
Today we did a survey about the problems we students face in our class. The results show the pressure we are under. ……
I have some advice to deal with these problems. ……

Answer 1

【答案】Today we did a survey about the problems we students face in our class. The results show the pressure we are under. Half of our class think they have too much homework. So they don't have much time for fun. Most of them feel worried because of bad grades. A few students think their biggest problem is that their parents can't understand them.

I have some advice to deal with these problems. First, they need to listen carefully in class and study hard to get good grades. Then, it's useful to talk to their parents though they are strict with children. If they are really nervous, they can relax themselves by doing sports or listening. They can help students forget about their problems.

【解析】这是一篇提纲作文。本文按照所给的题目和结合所给的内容完成了这份报告的回复。在文章中我们要针对调查的问题给出相应的建议，不要文不对题。文章的时态要一般现在时，文章用了一些固定短语，并且用了so,if等连词使得文章的上下文逻辑关系合理。文章语句通顺，没有出现语法错误和拼写错误是一篇不错的文章。