Question

假如你是李华，你想推荐你班同学王平为本学期最佳学生奖得主，请根据下列要点写

一封推荐信：

1．各门功课学得很好。历史很突出，对中国历史了解很多。

2．喜爱体育。足球踢得很好，是校足球队的成员。

3．非常乐于助人。经常在车上给老人让座；为希望工程筹款。有一天在回家的路上帮助一个迷路的儿童找到了妈妈。

要求：1．语法正确，意思连贯，书写规范，要点齐全，适当拓展；

2．词数不少于80词。

Dear Sir/Madam，

I'd like to____________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear sir,

I’d like to recommend Wang Ping for this year’s Best Student Award.

Wang Ping studies well. He is good at history and he knows a lot about Chinese history. Wang Ping likes sports, and he plays football well. He is a member of school football team. Wang Ping is really helpful. He often gives his seat to the old on the bus and collects things for Project Hope. Last week, on his way home he helped a lost child find his mother.

I think Wang Ping should get the award. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据表格内容可知本文要用一般现在时和第三人称，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如短语be good at，be helpful，give his seat to和句型I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。