Question

17．为了进一步增强中学生的安全意思，提高自我保护能力，请以"How to Keep Safe"为题，根据以下提示写．注意：表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；词数80左右．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's necessary to obey the rules in P．E class or in the swimming pool体育课或者游泳课的时候遵守规则是必要的．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
【高分句型二】
When we are in trouble，we can always ask our teachers for help当我们有麻烦的时候，我们总是可以找老师帮忙．
when引导的时间状语从句．

解答 How to Keep Safe
It's necessary to obey the rules in P．E class or in the swimming pool．【高分句型一】We mustn't bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems．（课堂安全）After class，we'd better try our best to guard against any possible danger．Please don't play dangerous games or chase each other．It's impolite to bully classmates who are short or small．（ 课间安全）Sometimes we may also feel stressed．Listening to music and doing some sports will make it easier for us to relax ourselves．（心理安全）
   When we are in trouble，we can always ask our teachers for help．【高分句型二】I am sure they are willing to offer advice．Besides，posters can be put up to help students know more about how to keep safe at school．If everyone can pay more attention to safety，we are sure to have a safe and wonderful school life．（我的意见）

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．