Question

近几年，我国实施法定节假日放假，于是，很多人赶在这些节假日外出旅游，引发了很多问题。请你就以下现象，发表自己的观点并提出改进措施。字数不少于80字。

垃圾满地。 2．车多，停不到车，乱停车。 3．插队。 4．在景区乱涂乱画。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

A lot of people choose to spend holidays by traveling.This causes a lot of problems.

You can see rubbish everywhere in many places of interest.Some sights are filled with cars.There is not enough place for so many cars,so drivers park everywhere.It’s rude of some visitors to push in before in others.Moreover,some people are rude enough to write and draw during their visit.I think it’s important for people to have good manners.Rubbish must be thrown into dustbins.We can choose public transport when going out.It’s polite to queue for our turn.Everyone should act to keep the sights clean.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文是呼吁环保的，近几年，我国实施法定节假日放假，于是，很多人赶在这些节假日外出旅游，引发了很多问题。所以围绕以下四点提示来展开写作， 1．垃圾满地。2．车多，停不到车，乱停车。3．插队。4．在景区乱涂乱画。最后还要发表自己的观点。

【亮点说明】这是一篇不错的作文，作者紧紧围绕提示语进行了写作，并且最后发表了自己的观点。而且文中还运用了不少短语，例如，a lot of ， places of interest， are filled with，It’s rude of sb. to do sth.， have good manners， be thrown into， keep the sights clean等等，为作文增添了色彩。

考点：提示性作文。