Question

书面表达 （15 分）

(A)按下列表格填空，至少5句。（5分）

Good Habit	Bad Habit
get up early	keep long fingernails

(B)请根据上面表格提示以How to Keep Healthy为题写一篇80词左右的短文。（10分）

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

(A)

Good Habit	Bad Habit
get up early	keep long fingernails
go to bed early	throw litter about
Do more exercise	smoke
eat healthy food	stay up

(B)

　How to keep healthy

　If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy food--more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you don’t feel well, you’d better see a doctor at once. And we should wash our hands before meals and drink enough boiled water every day. It’s necessary for our health.

We should not throw litter about, keep long fingernails, stay up and smoke etc. It’s also very important.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇表格式开放作文。本文要求按照所给的题目完成表格中的内容的填写，并根据所填表格中的信息完成这篇关于健康习惯的作文，我们要用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含填写表格然后在写作中涉及到保持健康的好的和不好的习惯等几个方面进行陈述，表达出个人的观点等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第一人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文完成了对表格的填写并且后面的作文内容和表格中的信息是相吻合的，在写作中作者简明、扼要地阐明了自己的见解，并包含了保持健康的几个好的习惯和应该戒除掉的几个坏习惯等。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含条件状语从句的准确使用为文章增色不少。如If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit.，If you don’t feel well, you’d better see a doctor at once.，sleep at least eight hours every day，throw litter about，学习中再注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：表格作文。