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4．假如你是李明，你的笔友Peter将随团来你校进行为期一天的学习交流活动，请你将以下安排发邮件告知．

学校安排上午活动	1．meet teachers and students 2．have a Chinese music class 3．learn how to make Chinese paper cut
你安排下午活动及理由	…

注意：1．内容必须包括上午的安排，下午的安排及理由；
2．开头已经为你写好，你只需接着写；
3．词数：70个左右．开头和结尾部分内容不计入总词数．
Hi Peter，
Iam writing to tell you the schedule of your coming visit．
In the morning，you are supposed to meet our teachers and schoolmates first and then have a Chinesemusic class．Next，you will be taught how to do Chinese paper cutting．
In the afternoon，I suggest you startby taking a bout trip on the West Lake．You will adire the beautifulsights around the lake．Then you can visit some interesting museums and famous temples to get to know thehistory of the city．
I'm looking forward to seeing you soon．
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是你的笔友Peter将随团来你校进行为期一天的学习交流活动，请你将安排发邮件告知．注意邮件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称和第二人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1学校安排上午活动：1）和老师学生见面2）中文音乐课3）学怎样去做中国剪纸
2你安排下午活动及理由
常用到的重点短语：
teach sb sth 教某人某事
decorate sth with sth 用某物装饰某物
be proud of 以…为自豪
have a great time 玩的开心
【高分句型】
1．In the morning，when you get to our school，you will meet our teachers and students，and they will give you a warm welcome．
when引导的时间状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则．
2．In the afternoon，you will watch a play called Tea House．
called Tea House．过去分词短语做后置定语，修饰paly．

解答 Hi，Peter，
       I am writing to tell you the schedule of your coming visit．
In the morning，when you get to our school，you will meet our teachers and students，and they will give you a warm welcome．【高分句型】（和老师学生见面）Next you will have a Chinese music class in the music room．I'm sure you'll like Chinese music．（中文音乐课）Then our teachers will teach you how to make  Chinese paper cut．It is very beautiful．We usually decorate the doors and windows with them on Spring Festival．（学怎样去做中国剪纸）
In the afternoon，you will watch a play called Tea House．【高分句型】It was written by Lao She．I think you will like it．（看话剧）Then you will enjoy Beijing Opera at the theater near our school．（看京剧）We Chinese people are all proud of Beijing Opera．（理由）Have you ever heard of it before？I'm sure you will have a great time in China．
I'm looking forward to seeing you soon．
Li Ming

点评 图表类作文写作之前考生首先要认真审题，确定文章的中心．表格内容要全部包括在作文中，词数要符合要求．句式表达要正确，注意句子的主谓宾、主系表等结构．文章结构要清晰．考生在平时的英语学习中需牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理，也可为文章增色不少．