Question

【题目】（题文）请根据提示写一篇题为＂The Population Problem＂ 的短文。（80 词左右）

提示：1. 人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；

2. 中国是世界上人口最多的国家；

3. 如果人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重问题（请举例说明）；

4. 我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。

要求：文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

The Population Problem

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Answer 1

【答案】The Population Problem

The population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with 1.3 billion. It’s about one fifth of the world’s population. A large population causes many difficulties, not only for every family, but also for the whole nation. It has become a serious problem. In many less developed areas, some parents prefer boys to girls. As a result, many girls can’t go to school. I think we should do something to control the population. One answer is known as the one-child policy. It has worked well in controlling China’s population.

【解析】这是一篇提纲类短文，所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，可有适当发挥。根据材料可知，本篇短文要把目前人口太多这一问题，以及我们中国人口的情况表达出来。通过分析可知，本文主要用一般现在时。写作中适当使用连词、从句等，使上下文意连贯，表达富有条理，更有逻辑性。

【亮点说明】

这是一篇优秀的作文。上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺，注意人称和时态，使用一般现在时和现在完成时。覆盖了所有信息，无拼写错误及标点误用，词数符合要求。