Question

根据提示和要求，写一篇短文。将短文写在答题卡情景作文空白处。

实现祖国的繁荣复兴是中华民族的伟大梦想， 每一个中国人都有自己的梦想，请以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文，描述你梦想的工作。

要求：

1．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。

2．词数：80—100。标题和短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3．参考词汇：grow up, in order to, subjects: math, physics, chemistry, biology, … , study hard，university, come true , help others

My Dream

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a ___________.

 

 

Answer 1

My Dream

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. I will study hard to get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger. To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以my dream 为题写一篇作文。这是一篇开放性的作文，题目为我的梦想。梦想是什么，为什么会有这样的梦想，怎样实现梦想，这些内容都需要学生们自己去完善。关于梦想这个话题，在教材中还是有所涉及的，所以这方面的一些词汇和句型，学生们应该有一定的积累。写这篇作文时，首先要确定自己的梦想是什么，然后再描述如何实现这个梦想。题目中给出了一些参考的词汇，写作时可以选择使用。另外还需要注意表达得流畅和有条理，多使用连词和学过的一些较好的句型和短语。

【亮点说明】这篇一篇比较优秀的范文。在这篇短文中，作者告诉了我们他的梦想是成为一名医生，而且作者之所以有这样一个梦想跟他小时候的经历是分不开的，所以在文章中作者还告诉了我们他想成为医生的原因。因为小时候和医生打过交道，所以作者也想成为一名医生。接着作者写了他该如何来实现自己的梦想。最后坚定认为自己的梦想一定会实现。整篇短文的结构清晰，叙述完整，有条理。短文中的较好句式有With the help of them, I was getting better、Since then I have hoped to become a doctor、I will study hard to get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream、I think my dream will come true one day等。

考点：开放性作文。