Question

【题目】我校选修课老师要求以小组为单位在学校里进行了一次调查，以下图表是你们小组的调查结果。请你根据图表信息，给选修课老师提供一份总结报告。第一段简单描述图表信息，第二段合理推测学生从事这些活动背后的原因，第三段介绍自己喜欢的课外活动，并说明理由。

要求：

1. 词数不少于80词；

2. 首句已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

As society develops, students are attaching more importance to how they arrange their after-school activities. According to the statistics shown in the chart,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】As society develops, students are attaching more importance to how they arrange their after-school activities. According to the statistics shown in the chart, ninety-nine percent of the students want to visit friends and more than half of the students like talking on the phone. Only 22 percent of students join the school clubs.

Why do so many students like to communicate with others? I think it is mainly caused by too much study pressure. They have a lot of lessons at school but little chance to exchange ideas with their classmates. After school, many students will spare time to talk to someone to ease the pressure of learning.

As for me, I like listening to light music. I joined the music club in my spare time because the beautiful music allows me to really relax.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如according to，in the chart，want to visit friends，more than，half of，on the phone，join the school clubs，so many，communicate with others，too much，spare time to do，as for me等。而复杂并列结构According to the statistics shown in the chart, ninety-nine percent of the students want to visit friends and more than half of the students like talking on the phone./ They have a lot of lessons at school but little chance to exchange ideas with their classmates.和I think it is mainly caused by too much study pressure./ I joined the music club in my spare time because the beautiful music allows me to really relax.等从句结构的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。