Question

20．假设校报英语专栏开展主题征文活动，请你根据表格提示，用英语写一篇短文，说明农村和城市各自的优点，投稿应征．
要求：1．可根据表格提供的信息适当拓展
2．语义通顺，句子连贯，书写工整．
3．词数：60词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）．

The life in the city and the countryside
city	countryside
more jobs，better schools，shopping is easier…	freher air，bluer sky，clearer rivers，much quieter…

Different people have different opinions about the life in the city and the countryside．
It depends on our needs．In the city，there are more jobs，better schools，and even beautiful theatres．Shopping is also easier．In the countryside，people can enjoy fresher air，bluer sky．They can see clearer rivers．And it's much quieter．What's more，the traffic is not so heavy as that in the city．So，in my opinion，it's hard to say which is better or worse．The city is better for studying and working．And the countryside is better for living．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It depends on our needs取决于我们的需要．
depend on 依靠，取决于
【高分句型二】
①What's more，the traffic is②not so heavy as that in the city另外，农村的交通不像城市的交通那样拥挤．
what's more另外，再者．
not so+原级+as…不如…

解答 Different people have different opinions about the life in the city and the countryside．It depends on our needs．【高分句型一】In the city，there are more jobs，better schools，and even beautiful theatres．Shopping is also easier．（城市的优点）In the countryside，people can enjoy fresher air，bluer sky．They can see clearer rivers．And it's much quieter．What's more，the traffic is not so heavy as that in the city【高分句型二】．（乡村的优点）So，in my opinion，it's hard to say which is better or worse．The city is better for studying and working．And the countryside is better for living（我的看法）

点评 写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．