Question

14．假期中，我们有时间做与学校学习生活不同的很多事情，如旅游、干家务、做义工、参加夏（冬）令营…请你根据以往的假期生活经历，用英语写一篇短文，跟同学们分享你在假期做过的一件事情及体会．
内容提示：（1）讲述你在假期里做过的一件事情；
（2）谈谈你做这件事情的体会．
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右．

Answer 1

分析 本篇文章写作时要注意是写自己的一次经历，还有对这件事情的体会，这是这篇文章的两大关键．使用第一人称，叙述过去的事用一般过去时态，要做到中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范．

解答 A trip to the country I went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays this year．I liked green plants，clear rivers lovely animals there．I breathed the fresh air on the mountain sometimes I went swimming in the river．I kept a diary every day．I liked not the scene of the countryside，but also the people there．I helped them to do farm work．I also helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons．The children were interested in English．They were good at reading writing，8ttt8．comdid not do well in listening speaking．I helped them improve their listening speaking．Their parents thought highly of me．I realized that knowledge is greatly needed in the countryside．

点评 本文是一篇提纲作文，要把握住文章的中心话题，用准时态和人称，注意过渡词的使用，保持文章连贯通顺．