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3．为弘扬广府文化，你校在上周六举行了一次"GuangzhouCultureFestival"的活动．请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，介绍活动的情况并提出你对下一年文化节的建议．

注意：（1）词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；
（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分．
In order to increase students'knowledge about the traditional culture of Guangzhou，our school held a"Guangzhou Culture Festival"last Saturday…

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分析 本文是一篇材料作文，需要我们根据题目中所给的信息，用英语逐条表达出来．围绕上周六举行的"GuangzhouCultureFestival"的活动，要求写出两部分的内容：一是要写出三项活动内容及相应的活动情况动名称，分别是粤剧歌唱比赛，图片展和美食展；二是对下一年的文化节提出建议．人称为第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时，最后提建议时可以用一般现在时．

解答 参考范文：
  In order to increase students'knowledge about the traditional culture of guangzhou，our school held a"guangzhou culture festival"last saturday．
  Many kinds of activities were held in the festival，such as cantonese opera competition，picture show and foodshow．most of the students thought the cantonese opera competition was interesting and many of them enjoyed taking part in it．the music sounded good and the clothes were beautiful．the picture show presented the changes of guangzhou，which could make us learn about the history and culture of guangzhou．the food show was the most popular activities in the festival．different kinds of food were served and all of them were delicious．from the food show，we also could learn some basic skills of cooking，which helped us become a good helper in our family．
  I hope we can have some cantonese films in our culture festival next time．in addition，we can organize some visitors to travel around our city．

点评 此题为材料作文，要仔细审题，不要漏掉要点，抓住重点，把所给的信息条理清楚地表达出来．要求语句连贯，语法，时态，单词等使用正确，书写规范，字数要合乎要求．