Question

根据下列表格的提示, 写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文。（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

根据下列表格的提示, 写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文。（80词左右）

内容要点:

过去	现在
1.旧房	1.高楼
2.河水肮脏	2.河水清澈(clean and clear).
3.步行、骑自行车上班	3.乘公交车、小汽车上班
4.道路狭窄(narrow).	4.街道宽阔(wide)，干净整洁
5.居住条件（living conditions）差	5.生活越来越好，环境（environment）越来越舒适。
	6 你的感想 ……（写两到三句）

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.

Answer 1

Changes in Our Hometown

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.

I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们用英文来描述家乡的变化，并用上表格中所给的信息。学生在写的过程中可能会有不会拼写的单词或句意表达不畅。

【亮点说明】1. 本文紧扣要求对家乡做了简单介绍，内容完整，用了表格中的信息。2. 句式丰富。表述灵活。文章对家乡的不同的前后变化进行比较时，衔接自然，顺畅。并没有刻意的使用以前、现在等词语进行生硬的对比。