Question

8．根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信．信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内．所给英文提示词语仅供选用．请不要写出你的校名和姓名．
假如你叫张毅，最近和美国笔友Tom通过邮件谈论各自的学校生活，他想了解你的最难忘的一节课．请你根据他的问题回复邮件．
提示词语：unforgettable（ 难忘的），interesting，excited

To          Tom From       Zhang Yi Subject     An unforgettable lesson Hi!Tom， I'm glad to hear from you．      ． Yours， Zhang Yi

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
However，①at the beginning of the lesson，I didn't know②how to teach，so the classroom ③was full of silence．然而，在课的开始，我不知道如何教，所以教室里充满了沉默．
①at the beginning of 在…的开始
②疑问词+不定式结构在句子中作宾语．
③be full of"充满"
高分句型二：
Not only can it expands my teaching experience，but it will improve my English．它不仅可以扩大我的教学经验，而且会提高我的英语水平．
Not only…but （also）不但…而且，连接前后两个对等的成分；前一个句子采用主谓倒装，后一个句子不到装，also可以省略．

解答 One possible version：
Hi!Tom，
I'm glad to hear from you．
    To everyone，they always come across many different things every day，so they will forget these things easily．But to me，there is one thing making me unforgettable．
    Last Saturday，I went to a primary school to teach English．This was my first lesson in my life and I felt very excited at that time．And I was not nervous．However，at the beginning of the lesson，I didn't know how to teach，so the classroom was full of silence．【高分句型一】Fortunately，I concentrated on the lesson very soon．In fact，I thought there were still many problems in the lesson．After class，the English teacher of this school gave me some advice．I believed they would be helpful to me in the future．【我最难忘的课及过程】
Through the lesson，I realize that pratice is very important．Not only can it expands my teaching experience，but it will improve my English．【高分句型二】I believe all the time"Where there is a will，there is a way"．【我的感受】
Yours，
Zhang Yi

点评 本题实际是应用文写作，所给材料较为详细，注意不能遗漏要点．根据要点内容可知要用简单句，包括主系表结构，主谓宾结构等．根据所给内容本文人称主要是第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时态．写作时要灵活运用，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确，尤其要注意短文开头结尾书信的书写格式．