Question

请写一篇介绍你理想中的学校的作文，须包含下列要点，

1. 学校在早晨9点开始上课，下午3点放学。我们有足够的时间可以去参加课外活动。

2. 学校有一个很大的食堂，里面有各种新鲜和健康的食物。

3. 学校一边有一个公园，公园是个休息的好地方。另一边有一个博物馆。

4. 老师们对我们很亲切，我们每天只有半个小时的家作，周末甚至没有作业

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Ideal School

My ideal school stars at 9:00 a.m.. and finishes at 3:00 p.m. We have enough time to take part in the after-school activities.

My ideal school has a very big dining hall. There are different kinds of fresh and healthy food in it.

There is a park on one side of the school and a museum on the other side. The park is a good place to rest in.

The teachers are very kind to us. We only have half an hour of homework every day. We don't even have homework at weeekends.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如There are different kinds of fresh and healthy food in it. We have enough time to take part in the after-school activities.等，only等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。